Asplen 2016-08-06 0009

I'm gonna give you the T on this piece, no lie, no bias!
Lining is good, I like how you're using Albrecht Durer's style for shading but with your twist to it! Very simplistic and it works!
The texturing is working for me aswell for most of the parts. My tiff with the texturing would be where the iris of the eye is with the shine, there should not be any dark definition of the shine. It's telling me that it is literally a white spot in the eye and I know that you're better than that!
HOWEVER having said that, you're getting much better with hair for texture, you're giving me very rough lines for the hair which is what is needed! However some of the lines that are in the hair shouldn't be there. For example look at the fringe and think about how low breaks happen in the hair, consider fringe lines is what I'm saying.
As for anatomy structure, well done! It looks like you understand the head fairly well, although I would bring the eyes in a tad. Also kudos for the fact you've tried with lips but the top lip needs to be made slightly taller and the bottom lip needs moving down slightly towards the line!
Also for the lips consider the actual lining of the mouth, I know this is Manga but even Manga pieces have a certain shaping to the mouth's innerline!

I've marked you down for Impact because this to me is nice but it's very basic compared to what else there is. I'm not gonna tell you how to get to that point, you've gotta figure that out yourself! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="387" title=" (Wink)"/>
I know I may have cut a little deep but that's only because I see potential in you and I wanna see you jump before you soar ^_^

Other than that, OVERALL great job with your presentation, regard everything I have given you and keep up the good work! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>